Features of Critical writing

The emphasis in critical writing is on texts and interpretation of the texts. These should be presented in a logical way using an objective, formal writing style.

Some objective Writing Tips

  • Use straightforward language.
    Take care with grammar and sentence construction. Avoid using a note-style of writing.
  • Try not to use pompous language.
    For example: use "find out" rather than "endeavour to ascertain". Try not to use jargon or clichés
  • Provide definitions.
    Include explanations of technical or unusual terms, unless you can reasonably expect your reader to know them.
  • Use impersonal language.
    Essays and reports should be written in the third person singular. Avoid personal terms such as 'I' or 'We'; the word 'It' should be used instead:
    For example:

"I think that this quotation is effective because ..." should read
"... the quotation is effective because …"

  • Be precise.
    Avoid using terms such as 'nice', 'good' or 'excellent' that lack a precise meaning One person's idea of what is meant by 'good' is not necessarily another's.
  • Be concise and to the point.
    For example: Use 'now' or ‘currently' instead of phrases like 'at the time of writing' or 'at this point in time'.

Use appropriate verb tenses.
Use the present tense when discussing texts:

‘Romeo is devastated at the news of Juliet’s death…’

Other writing pitfalls to avoid

  • Do not start sentences with linking words.

Such as: but, and, or yet.

  • Avoid using contractions.

For example:
'they're' for 'they are'.
'etc' and 'ie' should also be avoided.

  • Try to avoid making sentences overlong and complicated.
    Wordiness and padding can hide meaning.

Minor conventions: major impact

Small omissions and inconsistencies will not lose you marks but added together they can distract the tutor from your argument and affect their opinion of your argument.

It is often difficult to know the correct use of, for example, abbreviations or capitals.

Professional bodies and publishers have conventions – known as ‘house styles'. The guidance below refers only to some minor conventions and is not binding. Check your module handbooks for guidance too. You can also look at the ‘guidance for authors’ sections of journals in your subject. Once you have chosen a style, use it consistently.

Quotations

  • Verbatim (exact) quotations within the text are placed within single quotation marks. See quotation sheet.

Capitalisation

  • Use capitalisation as seldom as possible.
  • Use capitals only for names and proper nouns.
  • Don't capitalise names of subjects.

UK English and USA English

Use UK English.

ize is the usual USA spelling
ise is the usual UK spelling

So generally use 's' not ‘z’, for example:

  • minimise
  • organisation
  • capitalisation

Numbers

In sentences, generally spell out numbers less than 10.
‘The review was sent to four referees’.

This also applies to ordered events:

  • ninth (correct)
  • 9th (incorrect)
  • 112th (correct)

Exceptions are

  • measurements with a unit (8mmol/l) or age (6 weeks old)
  • when in a list with other numbers (14 dogs, 12 cats, 9 gerbils)
  • at the beginning of a sentence, for example, e.g. Nine boys not 9 boys

Express decades as, for example, 1960s (not 1960’s or ‘60s).

Reporting verbs

When introducing references into the text (citing) you should choose suitable 'reporting' verbs as these can:

  • strengthen the arguments you are presenting
  • help the reader understand why the source is relevant.

Some verbs are neutral:

describes...
states...
defines...

Some verbs draw attention to the author's viewpoint:

argues...
disputed...
conceded...

Some verbs give information about the author's work:

investigated...
evaluated...
estimated...

Some verbs highlight the author's viewpoint:

believes...
recognised...
predicted...

Other useful reporting verbs (use present or past tense as appropriate)

analyse/analysed
compares/compared
comments/commented
concludes/concluded
criticises/criticised
demonstrates/demonstrated
discusses/discussed
illustrates/illustrated
indicates/indicated
notes/noted
observes/observed
points out/pointed out
reports/reported
shows/showed
suggests/suggested
validates/validated
verifies/verified

 

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